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[ Vadim Kotelnikov ]   Created: 8/30/20   Closing date: 10/29/20

Submit your headlines as per guidelines published here:
http://innompics.com/events/ig2020/challenge-headline.html

Type the main headline in the 'Title' field and the subordinate headline in the 'Text' field

 
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[ Marina Vorobeva ] 9/4/20 Add a comment
Expert rating 8.67
Public rating 8.67

IG 2020 is game without borders,game without age, a game that will light a fire in your heart!

 
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[ Michael Zelin ] 9/9/20 Add a comment
  

Great version 1.0 - reflects important aspects of IG: online, no borders, lights fire in hearts.

Still, the subordinate part is kind of repetitive: has the same info as the main headline - IG 2020, without borders. Also, game without age sounds kind of non-clear: is it the game which is ageless, or it engages participants of all ages?

I. What do you think about these versions with some changes to your version 1.0?

1. main headline - very small changes:

1.1 IG 2020 online: celebration of Creativity that erases all borders!

1.2 IG 2020 online: celebration of Creativity across all borders! 

1.3 IG 2020 online: limitless Creativity across all borders!

 

2.  subordinate headlines - a  significant change with appeal to join the Games instead of explaining what it is:

2.1 Join the Games that will light-up fire in your heart and illuminate your talents!

2.2 - can continue if you or anyone else is interested  

II. We can come up with a version(s) with more changes - version 2.0, something like:

IG-2020 online: creativity celebration without borders! / Join the Games that will light-up fire in your heart and illuminate your talents!

 

I am posting these suggestions because I believe in Collective Creativity and Collective Wisdom - we can help each other to improve our game.

I think that this is what Innompics about: you compete with yourself - to improve your Game and help others to improve, too.

I would appreciate any comments/suggestions on my entries, including this one:).

Join the Games that will light-up fire in your heart and illuminate your talents!
 
 
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Re: IG 2020 online: the event that erases all borders!
  Michael Zelin 9/9/20
IG-2020 online: creativity celebration without borders!
  Michael Zelin 8 9/9/20
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